The Dunes

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The Dunes

The sand is so heavy,I run
My eyes, my mouth, sand, I suffer
A ligthhouse, far away

It's brightness attracts me, I see all blanck
Still, the sea, so beautifull, let me be frank

As a mere insect, I follow the light of this lighthouse,
Scares such natural actions  
Thirst, hunger, moon, sun, mixture os desires

The sand, soft sand when stepping on, lessons of it emanates
With the wind, God supplicates attention while they sing.

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INCHI commented on The Dunes

08-24-2009

inspirational yes!! enduring yes!! interesting yes!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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