the dance of love
her skin so warm.her mile so bright she filled my heart with such delight her long blonde hair.her legs so pure she was the one i knew for sure her heart as clean as a snow white dove i knew for sure,i was in love together we danced in a fallen rain my heart was stole with this funny pain no mountain so high.no river to wide could compare to the feeling i had inside this night had meaning,as i could see we knew this night was meant to be just the beginning.we reached for the stars we grabbed them from both near and far and when it was over no matter how hard i try i saw the biggest of those stars,from the gleam in her eyethe dance of love
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am2anangel commented on the dance of love
08-31-2009
- Great poem; just try and correct those couple of errors I mentioned and this will be a very strong piece. Well done, I enjoyed your rhythm and flow.
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