Thank-you Father

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Thank-you Father

As I walked those many miles, to find the self within;

Never certain of my steps or what would be lurking.

 

I crossed those miles in dread and fear of smiles and the spoken word;

Trusting not the outreached palm nor reaching out to be heard.

 

So solemn in my solitude and lost in fear and mistrust;

A fossil lived were once was heart…and not where once was us.

 

Regressing in my thoughts and hopes, my Soul the only salvation;

Or so it seemed with blackened dreams as ‘twas…before creation.

 

I spoke not words of kindness, in a time when not was felt;

But kindness being not spoken…was given as I knelt;

 

While bending knees and bowing head, my heart was lifted up;

With visions of a life long passed…and thoughts of a half-filled cup.     

 

 I woke to find that you were there, and you…would always be,

But sleep had blinded mind and soul, and you…I couldn’t see.

 

How can I give a greater gift than that, which was given me;

My hopes renewed and faith restored, now spirit…flying free.

 

What comes to mind can never be measured, or ever duplicated;

A gift of life, as once was given…and never separated;

 

For in the beginning was the Word and the Word created man,

And the Word was Flesh and the Flesh was tasked…to spread throughout the land.

 

Symbolically, I give the gift…of love unconditionally;

I send my trust, my faith, my prayers…and total loyalty.

 

I send this gift which can’t be measured, duplicated…or even heard;

This gift so great and yet so small…as given in a word...Thank-you.

by Trular

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DeepEclipse commented on Thank-you Father

07-01-2010

[Trusting not the outreached palm nor reaching out to be heard.] - Man you couldn't of been more right. I know that road and slip back into it from time to time. Its true though. It only works against itself. Like painting yourself into a corner. Elegantly crafted piece with excellent meter. He knows that we are but dust. He knows exactly what we need. Moving piece.

twaja commented on Thank-you Father

06-18-2010

DAMN!!!!! WHAT A WAY TO TELL OUR FATHER THANK YOU. YOU R SOOO GIFTED. THOSE WHO BELIEVE CAN RELATE TO THIS POEM

euroyankee2003 commented on Thank-you Father

09-28-2009

In so few words, you have spoken volumes............

lvds commented on Thank-you Father

09-26-2009

this poem is beautiful, and with it i can relate to the words, and know this family is lucky to have it

Trular

09/26/2009

Thank-you!

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Trular’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Beginning of it All 0
My Angel Walked Before Me In This Soldier Song 1
The Chance We Miss 1
When Morning Came 2
Song of Life 1
Thank-you Father 4
TRANQUILITY 3
I Wish 1
Wake-up Tomorrow 2
Oh My Soul 1
Your Friend 1
Friend 1
"One America …Stand-up" 3
The Flight 2
Beauty of the Darkness 2
A Walk With Me 3