TAINTED LOVE

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    TAINTED LOVE
    it feels like my heart
    is sitting in the fires of hell
    burning and screaming
    to be free
    from the pain and hurt
    that you cause it
    i now know
    you are the devil in disguise
    put on your pretty boy charm
    trick me into thinking
    you was the one
    but it was your plan all along
    to burn my heart
    with your tainted love



    just a lil something i just came up with i know its short but i hope you enjoy its kind of my freestyle lol


    WRITTEN BY:TORIET

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    blackfootlady commented on TAINTED LOVE

    12-11-2009

    it would not let me in to vote.hold on while i type 50 more letters lol
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    blackfootlady commented on TAINTED LOVE

    12-11-2009

    Hello Cottonluv,I haven't seen you for a few.EXCELLENT short write !I loved it,tc.Churv
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    redbloodink commented on TAINTED LOVE

    12-11-2009

    Some times few words say more then many.... I just simply enjoyed it.... Red
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    SILKYTWEED commented on TAINTED LOVE

    12-09-2009

    Excellent Write....short but fully deep in reaching and touching poetically....Thanks for sharing!
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    cliftondurant commented on TAINTED LOVE

    11-19-2009

    the good thing about it is that you find out in time pick up the peices and move on thanks for sharing
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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