SWIM

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    If you dont know how to do it, Be Like Nikey -- JUST DO IT!

    SWIM

    PARLAY INTO THE WATERS

    THRUST AGAINST THRUST

    PROPELLED ARMS, MUSCLES ALIVE!

    PUSH! PUSH! YOU MUST!

    SYNCHRONIZED FIBERS, MIND AFLOAT

    GO WITH THE FLOW

    BUT, I CAN’T SWIM

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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    Poetry1959’s Poems (21)

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