Summer's Night

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Meh....summery mood(: enjoy.

Summer's Night

The stars were bright,
The air was cool,
The bugs were gone,
Just me and you.
Our hearts were light,
Your eyes so blue,
I realized that,
I was in love with you.
That Summer's night was beautiful,
But the taste was bittersweet.
It lasted for such a short time...
Then you left me.
With my heart broken and my eyes wet,
I ran away, to never again,
Fall under the spell, of a
Summer's Night.

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shadelight commented on Summer's Night

03-24-2011

This is really, really sweet. Also, I admire that you show off your age, which I think this is a very advanced piece for it. I love your writing so far!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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