Subtlety

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    Lyrics to a song composed by a friend.

    Subtlety
    look up there
    can you see
    faces in the clouds?
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hatred in my eyes?
                 ~o~
    When you look around
    you will probably find
    what I'm all about
    and how I'm gonna play
                 ~o~
    Maybe you're confused
    even maybe amused
    at the facts of this
    hide and seek charade
                 ~o~
    when you try to run
    i can see you warmth
    and you're just the prey
    in this sick old game
                 ~o~
    I love you in my wrath
    another reason why
    you come back to me
    with much subtlety
                 ~o~
    look around
    can you see
    people in the sky
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hunger in my mind
    look up there
    can you see
    faces in the clouds?
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hatred in my eyes?
                 ~o~
    When you look around
    you will probably find
    what I'm all about
    and how I'm gonna play
                 ~o~
    Maybe you're confused
    even maybe amused
    at the facts of this
    hide and seek charade
                 ~o~
    when you try to run
    i can see you warmth
    and you're just the prey
    in this sick old game
                 ~o~
    I love you in my wrath
    another reason why
    you come back to me
    with much subtlety
                 ~o~
    look around
    can you see
    people in the sky
                 ~o~
    look at me
    can you see
    hunger in my mind

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    mufasa commented on Subtlety

    08-09-2009

    l love the play on words,and the emotions thah comes with them is real and tangible. Keep writing. Lovely.
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    jademelissa74 commented on Subtlety

    08-02-2009

    Nice lyrics. I like the imagery used to composed the piece. Kudos to the writer. :))
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    Wallysaruman

    08/03/2009

    Thanks for your support! I will be posting many more, soon. And yes, they're all mine.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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