sorrowful surrender

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    defeat is at my doorstep.

    sorrowful surrender

     Im afraid of letting go,
    Im afraid of another chapter.
    I dont wanna stop hoping,
    I wanna wait forever.

    Im afraid to open the box,
    Of which I kept all the pain.
    But the more Im hiding,
    The harder it is to be sane.

    I wanna lose my senses,
    Even for a day or two.
    I wanna be free of this disease,
    I wanna be free of you.

    I dont wanna admit that you're on my mind,
    I deny the fact that you still linger.
    It hurts to take note,
    'Coz in my thoughts you always wander.

    I dont wanna think of you!
    'Coz when I do, I lose track of everything.
    I dream and hope for you,
    My other half, you define my whole being.

    So...

    I surrender to Venus,
    Let her will be done!
    If true love isnt for us,
    Then let this feelings be GONE!

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