So Beautiful So Sad

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    So Beautiful So Sad

     So beautiful on the outside
    Men notice her, but run and hide
    A beauty trapped in her own little world
    Alone, afraid and so cold
    So beautiful and yet so lonely
    Men are afraid to approach her
    They think shes stuck up
    They don't know her
    When all she really wants
    Is to meet a nice guy
    no more jerks, shes tired of lies
    Tears in her eyes
    She's so despised
    She wants to scream, but holds her cry's
    A beauty yes, but can anyone really see
    Never getting to know her
    For fear of being rejected
    she feels so alone and disrespected
    How can this be?
    Can they not see her beautiful heart
    She's so afraid and torn apart

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    Feelingsofapoet commented on So Beautiful So Sad

    08-24-2009

    Wow, I've had many friends express what your poem so beatifully articulates. Well said.
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    rollerderby commented on So Beautiful So Sad

    08-23-2009

    It's a sad tale, on one hand she wants love and longs for happiness. But at the same time she's afraid that others will find her stuck up and a snob. Takemy advice dear. Live your life for you, love when you find it in your heart and don't worry what others think. For only you know what'sin your heart. A well written poem of the heart, well done!!!
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    dragonfly1023 commented on So Beautiful So Sad

    08-23-2009

    It's difficult to imagine one so beautiful so forlorned by their appearance yet I've read similar views on this site. As in the case of the others I believe the right person has just not come along yet for this woman, and confidence is the key to his success.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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