Silent Cancer In A Little Girls Shoes

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    • alexan
    • life is not a dream, people would say. I confused my reality with my dreams. Isan't that a bad thing? I don't really think so because deja vu really happens, its true

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    No i do not have SILENT CANCER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I saw this little blond girl with blue and brown eyes. She was small. She had a growing disorder and she was gonna die. I wrote a poem to her as if i were her. Thats what a discripitive writer does. Be someone elses shoes and become them in one poem... thats what some things u could do in poems like this..............

    Silent Cancer In A Little Girls Shoes

     My heart turns around
    My knees wobble

    .........I faint....... right where i stand........

    My feet r no longer visble
    My ending to my shin would fall to the floor

    .........I feel reched pain...........

    When someone dies
    There pain is brought to me

    .........magically...........

    When someone crys
    I bleed salt water tears and my tears are my blodd

    ...........fainted tears are now stained blood............

    people hear a song that they like
    But do they understand?

    ................there stupidity belongs to my brain.............

    If someone is hurt
    I'm hurt 10 times worse

    .................even though I feel bad for them.............

    If i was hurt
    Everyone would have my pain........

    .................2 months ago..........i found out that i had..................



    .................................Cancer......................................

    I'm gonna die in 10 months.............
    I'm sorry...........Silent................Cancer

    I'm sorry my friends
    I'm sorry to everyone, eecpt my family, You treated me like shit.........

    Dying at a younge age is horrible
    I feel terrible

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    pocketofdreams6 commented on Silent Cancer In A Little Girls Shoes

    09-27-2009

    Wow this is a very intense poem.... Are you really dying of cancer, or did you just put yourself in that perspective???? You had some incorrect spellings but other than that I liked it quite a bit, very intense!
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    alexan

    09/27/2009

    perspective.thank u! i have to work on my vobcabulary more.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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