Shattered

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  • Lost Love

    Shattered
    Broken things
    Dissonant words
    All tangled with crippled dreams.

    Door slamming
    Love retreats
    All with myriad cries repeat.

    Engine revving
    Anger swells
    All alone the heart does dwell.

    Desolation teeming
    Fear pulsing
    All in anguish does love end.

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    PRober commented on Shattered

    07-13-2009

    nice! short, to the point and a good job doing just that! write on!
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    alejapoet commented on Shattered

    03-06-2009

    Bravo!You have found your way of release and you write and have expressed yourself very well. Kudos to you my friend. Remember people will want to be your friend and will not look at your work at all so be careful of those people. Author Aleja Bennett http://alejabennett.net84.net
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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