Shapes
Hectic ShapesPurple like grapes
Triangle emotions
Hectagon missions
With adult decisions
I miss my circles
When it was easy
Now the days
Are empty squares
Soon the shapes
Will slowly form
The directions of our Lives...
Shapes
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CrazyPurple like grapes
Triangle emotions
Hectagon missions
With adult decisions
I miss my circles
When it was easy
Now the days
Are empty squares
Soon the shapes
Will slowly form
The directions of our Lives...
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poeticmike commented on Shapes
10-21-2012
- Such a strong gorgeous mind twirling piece here.. Very lovely and my your imagery of shapes within your words accompanied by how you conveyed your message deeply has the synapses of my brain firing rapidly..Im blown away.. Great job zorro....poeticmike
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10/21/2012
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