Setting in Hollow

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  • Depressed
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  • Loss
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  • Alone
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  • Loneliness

    Poem Commentary

    My heart is a tattered pain of emptiness.

    Setting in Hollow

     My heart is empty
    All alone
    In a small mess

    I used to love
    Everyone i saw

    But my voice
    Began to leave

    And my eyes
    Began to fade

    I was dying
    Slowly and surely

    They stopped listening
    Forgetting me

    All alone
    Am I

    They left me
    To die slowly

    They thought I was sad
    Too sad to speak

    My heart became hollow
    As empty
    As the day I was born
    With no one to save me
    Or even to hear me

    My heart is as hollow
    As the setting sun
    Is beautiful

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    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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