See you in Hell
Im afraid of myself.Stick that gun to my head,
because once Im dead,
you can stop hating on me.
Im alive,
I'm breathing well.
But I can close my eyes,
see you in hell
See you in Hell
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Poem Commentary
short and simpleStick that gun to my head,
because once Im dead,
you can stop hating on me.
Im alive,
I'm breathing well.
But I can close my eyes,
see you in hell
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ayyan commented on See you in Hell
12-25-2010
- Very good writing, which I like - see in hell. yes the hell is inside only-ayyan dj
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angelchaser commented on See you in Hell
12-06-2010
- Sounds kinda like something I'd write, I love it! Hope to read more of you!
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thecross commented on See you in Hell
12-06-2010
- frustration mixed with misunderstanding breeds anger and unwholesome thoughts, nicely written
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koolmom0 commented on See you in Hell
12-06-2010
- This is very powerful and well written. Although I would much rather see you in Heaven. :) Koolmom0
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sk8erpoet commented on See you in Hell
12-06-2010
- this is an awesome poem....it is the kind of poem that people can relate too...there is a lot of emotion in it as well...great write..sk8
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