sealed,

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  • Dark Poetry

    sealed,
    A mornin coffee,
    We had once shared
    Wrinkled grin
    I remembered

    Got ‘tis found haven
    Only both of us
    Could fathom
    Got ‘tis found words
    Only both of us
    Could utter

    Yet your eyes
    So distant like the stars
    The breathin I hear
    Are faint ,more than a baby’s weak cry
    The warmth
    Quickly freezes
    The sunshine
    Sets in an instant

    A puzzle you’ll remain
    A riddle I can’t explain
    A question I can’t answer
    An enigma I forever know?

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    Miguel7Rogali commented on sealed,

    07-21-2009

    whoa, mare seems deeply set, i like the line"the sunshine sets in an instant" so visually evoking
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    rollerderby commented on sealed,

    01-18-2009

    I told you I would be watching for another poem. Another fine poem, Sounds like someone went away that you cared for and now wonder where they are? Doug
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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