robert &robbie

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    robert &robbie

    I used to have a full blood brother and he died in a fire.also who went with him was his two year old son who was just broke from his passaphire,his compant and friendship i still desire.now there in gods choir,he said he would never leave me is he a lier,aswers i wish to aquire,my brain is going hay wire,my brother died in a fire.the firemen found robby under a chair.he had a scair that nothing could compare.his screems could be heard everywhere,lifes not fair,when robbies mom heard what was going on she left work and went straight there.then she started pulling out her hair,sometimes you still find itting in a cold stair.she lost everything when they found the baby under the chair.i sit and wonder at night,why didnt my brother break through a wall like he used to fight.something just aint right,and now they are only in gods sight.knowing still i fail to see the delight,holding my tears back with all my might.help me get through this night,my future is not looking bright...ozzydio18

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    charlamain commented on robert &robbie

    07-08-2009

    oh my gosh ozzydio18 this one is good is a tear jerker, so real, my heart would go out to u , great one keep writing and never give up k loners are ok take care charlamain

    ccslim commented on robert &robbie

    04-18-2009

    Content really really good and sad with inner turmoil. A few flaws here and there with the flow! If true my heart is with you!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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