Ripped apart

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  • Sadness

    Ripped apart

    Twisted and torn apart
    Pushed this way and pulled that way
    Rejected by one direction
    Accepted from another
    To find the one you truly want
    Only to be pushed away
    Games played with your mind
    And your heart ripped apart.
    To think they care about you
    Or even love you
    Only to get stabbed in your back
    You may ask why these games get played
    Numerous answers to be given
    Only none which you are truly looking for
    Twisted and torn apart
    Pushed this way and pulled that way
    Just another broken dream
    And another fallen hope!

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    banginmoma commented on Ripped apart

    06-03-2009

    i really like the idea in this piece. you could be a little more specific though. but it is still really good.
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    iceypenguin

    06/05/2009

    thanks. it was just how i was feeling at the time bout a so called relationship i was in. the "she" was the guys g/f he was trying to get rid of at the time.

    iceypenguin

    06/05/2009

    scratch the reply comment i left. i was thinking of a diff poem i wrote. this one was about a married guy.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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