Releif

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    Releif

     I thought my life was over when you walked out of my life,
    thought id be lost without you...
    An although sometimes i feel lonely,
    mostly i feel at ease.
    The day you left,
    the day my heart stopped breaking

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    Moorthy45 commented on Releif

    01-12-2011

    The outburst of a failed-love is nicely captured. Moorthy45
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    Topaz2011 commented on Releif

    01-12-2011

    heartbreaking, and yet lovely. well done, I like.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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