rainbow

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    rainbow

     If you were a drop of rain
    in the shape of a tear
    you fell from my eyes
    i whiped away all fear.

    if you were a breath of wind
    blowing gently through the trees
    you softly brushed my face
    and sit my heart at ease.

    if you were a flake of snow
    falling softly from heaven
    you gently touched my face
    melted and gave me peace.

    but i see a beautiful rainbow
    arched across a rainy spring day
    so beautiful and yet so stunning
    you simply take my breath away.

                                DDavis

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    iStrangeDucky commented on rainbow

    11-22-2009

    A quiet simplicity on its own, but when given voice, a shower of feeling sprung from the heart with wings of light phenomenon. Rainbow, how quaint. Excellent.
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    truckingd

    11/23/2009

    thank you again, this was the first poem i wrote

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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