Rain

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    I did this when I was around 11 years old

    Rain

    Clouds are darkening.
    The sun is now in hiding.
    Rain starts falling down. 

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    scotslad60 commented on Rain

    11-08-2013

    Very descriptive in it's simplicity, and revealing in its symbolism.

    FranzJ commented on Rain

    10-17-2013

    nature and weather and man tries to predict it......................

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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