"WELCOME!!!"

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"WELCOME!!!"

Welcome to hell,
Which pit would you like to rent?
We got Killer Pit,Death Pit,
Shark Pit,Demon Pit,
The Torture Pit is down in the cellar,
Only the .V.I.P. goes down there.

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kadience commented on "WELCOME!!!"

06-09-2009

i really like this poem because it has the same stuff i,m interested in but more out there i,ll admit i am starting to like this girl it kinda sounds like something i,ve written before all i have to say is keep up the good work

To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

nightstar’s Poems (6)

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"WELCOME!!!" 1
"I Love You Mom." 0
"Gee Iam Glad Is Raining." 0
"Nancy" 0
"My 2 Son Xavier That Mommy Loves." 0
"A Gift From God Above." 0