"Sacrifice"

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    "Sacrifice"

     When you love someone; really love someone, you sacrifice,
    you learn to give all because nothing else will suffice.
    you always give and never take,
    you show that you're real and never fake.
    Because when you sacrifice, truely sacrifice,
    you find true meaning in your life.
    when you stumble along the way, keep your head up and remember to say,
    I'm a better person, i've paid the price, i've learned how to


                                    SACRIFICE



    thanks to my dad for letting me have this poem

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    Mandi commented on "Sacrifice"

    11-23-2009

    That is a nice tribute to your father Keep on writing , it helps to put your feelings into words Express yourself
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    Coreyhill

    11/24/2009

    my father is still alive but this poem was to my mom. he let me post it

    Saylar commented on "Sacrifice"

    11-10-2009

    Sweet, short and to the point. Excellent write young man! I like this! No beating around the bush, just BAM, right in your face honesty. I like it! Saylar
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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