"Living Life"
Living life to seriously creates no rewards, living on the edge is like living with a double sword, living with wisdom protects your soul, to not live at all will put your life on hold, living cautiously spirits become sure, living with faith the life becomes pure, life living is a God given gift, careful who you choose to live your life with. Life is good bar none, living life to seriously denies your life the fun."Living Life"
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hdmac commented on "Living Life"
07-15-2009
- Good poem. Too many commas though. It seems like a list. I think you misspelt "to". It should be "too".
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07/25/2009
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