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    As we sit here I turn away afrade,
    That you are about to see the tears
    That are forming in my eyes
    You ask if anythings wrong
    I smile and tell you that i am fine
    The truth is if i went for your hand
    Would you hold mine?
    If I went for your lips,
    Would you kiss me?
    If I went for you heart,
    Would you love me too?

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    Wakeitha commented on Question

    07-25-2009

    Wow! Beautiful its like you felt what I felt and was thinking the same words.Excellent writting and words I love your written.
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    origionalmerlin commented on Question

    03-23-2009

    a light touch, well done
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    jeffloving commented on Question

    03-16-2009

    hey...this lovely...nd seems u r talking to me directly .lol.i love it cos its direct and so easy to grasp...keep it up sweetie...
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    gothicsueaside commented on Question

    03-10-2009

    i hope to see more work from you i would love to read more you are very talented
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    gothicsueaside commented on Question

    03-09-2009

    wow i am lost for words
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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