Perfect Moment

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    Perfect Moment

    His arms around me~
    tight~
    I feel safe~
    His body~
    His warmth~
    radiating~
    Where his hands touch my bare arms~
    leaves a tingling trail~
    Evaporating from his shirt~
    that smell~
    filling my nostrills~
    fogging my eyesight~
    His hot breath on the back of my neck~
    goosebumps~
    Falling asleep~
    I'm safe here~
    With the love of my life~
    Roberto~

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    Phoenix9 commented on Perfect Moment

    01-13-2009

    very well done, keep up the good work

    kenparme commented on Perfect Moment

    12-24-2008

    Good poem-very expressive-don't sell yourself short-good work.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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