PASSION OF THE MOMENT

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    PASSION OF THE MOMENT

     HERE A LOVER IN FRONT OF ME
    ...AWAITING ..SUBMITTING..PASSION OVER RULING
    MY MIND ERASING THE ONE   
        DEVOTED TO EVER WORD I BREATH
    BETRAYING A VOW THAT WILL.. DESTROY
       EVERY PART OF ME...
     FOR THE "PASSION OF THE MOMENT"...                                         THERE COULD NEVER BE
       A WORD SPOKEN ..I TELL MYSELF..
    THERE WILL NEVER BE
       BEHIND THE DOOR SO SECRETLY
     BUT VENGANCE YOU WILL SUFFER INSTABILITY
     THE PASSION OF THE MOMENT
       IS ALL I SEE
    CONSIDERING NONE...NOT EVEN THE ONE
       WAITING  HOME FOR ME
    I PRESS ON...MY MIND HAS GONE
       TO THE INTENSITY
    THIS PASSION OF THE MOMENT                                                           ...                           IN FRONT OF ME
    WHEN I AWAKE
    THIS GREAT MISTAKE
    BURNS DEEP.. INSIDE OF ME
    FROM UP ABOVE ..A LOVE SENT
       THERE WILL NEVER BE
    SO DESPERATELY  SEARCHED.. I NEVER FOUND
    I BROKE HER HEART
    AS SHE LEFT ME ..WITHOUT A SOUND
    SO IF YOU FIND A GIRL LIKE MINE
    DONT LET HER GO
    HER LOVE WILL FILL YOUR HEART
    IF YOU LET IT
    AND WHEN IT'S FILLED.. HER LOVE WILL OVER FLOW
    FOR THE "PASSION OF THE MOMENT"
       DONT LET HER GO!!!!





     






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    laydbak1 commented on PASSION OF THE MOMENT

    08-04-2009

    Pieces like this always make me wonder the age old question of how can someone be so appreciated, cherished, and loved so much and so deeply, only after they're gone...???
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    Qualin

    08/04/2009

    just like the age old saying the grass always looks greener on the other side..demonic

    connsk8 commented on PASSION OF THE MOMENT

    08-03-2009

    I like that you regretted it, you get a ten just for that!!!
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    Tempy commented on PASSION OF THE MOMENT

    07-30-2009

    wonderful beautiful almost sad but i hope your smiling write more i'll read em all :) take care
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    Qualin

    07/10/2010

    AT THE TIME YOU POSTED THIS COMMENT I DIDNT KNOW THERE WAS SUCH A THING I AM JUST NOW FINDING ALOT OF THESE COMMENTS AND ANSWERING ESPECIALLY TO A POETRESS LIKE YOU AND MY BUDDY FRIEND FROM DOWNARE SOMEWHERE!!!QUALIN

    cynthiakehl commented on PASSION OF THE MOMENT

    07-29-2009

    very passionate, to have love and to lose it! heart-felt , love your style of writing!
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    Qualin

    07/10/2010

    THANK YOU SO MUCH FAVORITE FRIEND...BEEN MISSING YOU...QUALIN AND THANKS FOR THE HEART FELT COMMENT!!!!

    cottoncandi commented on PASSION OF THE MOMENT

    07-29-2009

    This is very emotional I like it..................
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    Qualin

    07/10/2010

    I WAS ALWAYS EMOTIONAL ABOUT COTTON CANDY...STILL AM...STILL ARE OR IS THAT STILL IS?...YOUR CONSTANT FRIEND QUALIN

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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