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    I said "Open me up"
    Do you not understand?
    Because I can not find myself. Everyday I wake ,I look and see the image in the mirror. You know the one? The worn down shell that looks at you as if you never existed. Yeah that's me.
    I continue to amaze myself ,always giving the excuse," It'll be a better day."
    Right. It's always the same and never ever changed. It's more like acne one day just one, next a whole cluster of complete chaos. Yep, that's me a pimple.(Blackhead or white)
    But really, its not all bad .
    I just make it worse then what it appears. But continue to open myself up and give it hope. Will I ever find the being inside who can decifer my fate? Who know's?
    But maybe one day someone will open me up and find the real me.
    So please " Open Me Up,,,Please!"

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    FranzJ commented on Open

    10-14-2009

    I like it. It sounds like me too. I know the feeling well.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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