One of those Beautiful Moments in Time

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    One of those Beautiful Moments in Time

    While you lay resting preparing to leave
    a most beautiful thing happened
    that was beyond belief.
    As you were lying peacefully on your bed
    Your granddaughters gathered round you
    from your foot to your head.
    One touching your cheek,
    the other kissing your hand,
    all telling of their love for you,
    What a blessed moment, you must have said.
    So Mom, with your passing, as these angels expressed,
    We will love you Forever
    and Forever we have been blessed.

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    Tempestlady commented on One of those Beautiful Moments in Time

    06-02-2009

    A very good poem. A mouthful of words. You painted a very beautiful picture or me of a good death by your mother. Congratulations, its not easy to do.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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