one fine day

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    one fine day
    I am a man without a woman
    a lion without a lioness
    a king without a queen
    a music without a writer
    a day without a date
    like adam's first day on earth
    one fine day
    one sweet day
    you would look towards my way
    u would smile at me
    reach your hands to me
    your heart to be opened for me
    one fine day
    the day i had been patiently waiting for
    intoxicated by your absence
    high and going wacky
    one sweet day
    u would know that i love you...


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    sincere commented on one fine day

    05-14-2009

    Very nice, simple and sweet!
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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