one branch (observation)

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    one branch (observation)

     don't become easily dormant by
    the tempting shade under the lazy tree.
    rather climb to its highest branch and
    observe the rapid flowing river of existence
    and know,
    some people wade through life
    some pan for gold.

                tyke

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    knight4696 commented on one branch (observation)

    09-09-2009

    This is elequently stated. .... My mantra: Live life now while there's a life to live .... For it will soon enough be replaced by death.
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    tykehall

    09/09/2009

    i like it(your mantra that is) and i believe that death is a whole new adventure that requires as much positive energy and knowledge as we can gather in this life. this life is like a sink or swim thing,you can be a boat or a rock in the waters of life it's about personal choices.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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