Oceans

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Oceans

Fallen angel;
from the fortress in your mind,
where once i descended into a world unkind.
Treading the light,
in the oceans of dark.
Drowned souls still swimming;
cruel intentions to embark.
Your desperate shelter mannered,
from one side to the other.
Hopeless tattered wings,
which left us with no cover.

Frozen angel;
in the fortress of your life,
where stark reality scars like the blade of a knife.
Stealing the night,
in the oceans of black.
Drowned world i swim in;
face first on my back.
My desperation faulters,
from one liar to another.
Hopeless scattered dreams,
left a spirit undercover.

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am2anangel commented on Oceans

10-13-2009

Very well written, The loss and sense of disillusionment is strong in this piece. I enjoyed the read great job.

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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