O my bride...
O my bride... o my god... alone here i am again.. alone with this cold world... alone and thinking about you... here i am... with no one... only with you... and so deep inside you... thinking and thinking... but only just about you.... sweetheart... distantly, there so faraway you are... but a truths that never can be changed... you are here with me... here always as the day we met there... which never to be forgotten... my sweet beautiful bride... into my lonely world... alone no one sharing me now... only with you... i`m enjoying a thinking of you... thinking about you... about those lips that i kissed... about those eyes which i saw my face in... about your smile which gave a joy to my heart... about your great sexy body that i touched... about your sweet tongue which gave a honey... that savour which never got before... my beautiful sweet bride... lot of memories running however i closed my eyes.. memories about you and your love... that love which you taught me... that love which you showed me... that love which never to die... wish you were here with me now... as you are into my mind now... wish this world to be more easy not so hard... to meet you soon... my beautiful bride... the moon can hide... stars in a sky also can hides... so i can forget them all... but never ever to forget you for a second... even when you hide... miss you so much... love you more... and can`t resist your love... by: hazem02@yahoo.com http://www.thestarlitecafe.com/poems/105/poem_91126962.html http://www.poemhunter.com/poem/o-my-bride/ please feel free to read and to leave your comments through my links above... that would helps.. yours,.. hazem al..O my bride...
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Mandi commented on O my bride...
10-19-2009
- I feel the passion you relate to your loved one would be easier to relay to your read if it were in poetic form . You have a great feel for your readers and involve them to the point of their inclusion . This would look very nice written in free verse. This would do much for the rhythm and expression.
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