Naked

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  • Confusion

    Naked
    Ever dreamt a naked dream?

    Naked forests...Naked streams...

    Weeds tangled where flowers should grow...

    Trees bowed over breezeways where winds used to blow...

    Naked butterflies, No colors, No wings...

    Naked birds of any sort, With no songs to sing...

    Ever looked out through a window, No sight left to see?

    Naked city, Lights all went out...

    Naked mountain tops, No one to shout...

    Ever look into the mirror, So fully clothed...

    And witnessed something so naked...

    So EMPTY...So Cold...

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    dahlusion commented on Naked

    05-02-2013

    Beautifully surreal in all of its diction and imagery, and the closing is nothing short of brilliant. Bravo!
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    trocka7 commented on Naked

    09-05-2009

    This is really, really great! I feel you on this for sure, and great use of words too! This is beautiful....
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    Crush commented on Naked

    09-05-2009

    this is brilliant and deeply sad because i relate. besides that, it is a well written piece.nice job. 10 from me.
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    drewking commented on Naked

    12-16-2008

    great work..love reading poems i can feel...
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    beautifuldeath commented on Naked

    12-08-2008

    spectacular imagery, powerful words. loved it
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    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

    LoganJosef’s Poems (12)

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    Random scribbles at midnight 1 11/14/2008
    Confused 3 11/14/2008
    Naked 8 11/14/2008
    Angel Boi 2 11/14/2008
    Watching her slip away 3 11/14/2008
    Momma 3 11/14/2008
    Emptiness 2 11/14/2008
    Solitude 1 11/14/2008
    Set free 0 11/14/2008
    Becoming me 1 11/14/2008
    Tear me from me 4 11/14/2008
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