Myself

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    Myself


    When will things be ok? When will I be able to smile everyday?
    if I knew how to live with myself alone, and maybe go more than a week without getting stoned, I could get to know myself and everyone else would know me too. But how can I make them see? What do I do? For them to truly know me I have to learn to see what they see. I have to open up and start being me. Then i can truly say I know who I am. Then maybe the lights won't be so dim. I am me and you are you lets get to know one another and share the things we do. You can be my friend and i can be yours too. We can help each other to make it though.

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    Christine56 commented on Myself

    05-28-2009

    I like! Very good structure made up of both nice rythm and meaning, as well as feelings that can be understood by most of us...I think your ok and should smile every day for you have a true talent...
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    AdelKernan commented on Myself

    03-03-2009

    At first I thought that this was gonna be one of those "Oh, life is so dark and horrible, boo-hoo" kind of poem, but I liked how it surprised me and finished on a more positive note. Its kind of playful in the end, if that makes sense. I liked how the rhymes happen at different points inside the lines, throws you off a bit. Cool.
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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