My New Groove

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    This is a poem written after kissing a new friend in Ocho Rios Jamaica I stumbled back into the hotel in a trance and as soon as I was back in Atlanta this is what I wrote while reflecting.
    My first attempt at writing poetry.  All feedback welcome. 

    My New Groove

     My New Groove  

    I now fully understand my new groove  
    I was experiencing an intimacy
    that surpasses logic

    And chatting about the awkwardness and differences in people
    While loving life and respecting space
    with a stranger  

    I was being a friend with the intensity of the unknown
    While exploring sensualities that only exist
    in the flicker of an eyelid and
    the tilt of a smile  

    A quiet moment, a loving touch, a tender kiss
    All contributed to

    my new groove.

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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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