My Empty Place

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    My Empty Place

    I cry all night but no one hears
    This is my empty place
    And when it's light I'll try to hide
    The sadness on my face

    I will try hard not to fake it
    That is really my intent
    But when they ask me how I am
    It is so hard to pretend

    The loneliness consumes me
    I don't know what to do
    Ten years ago I didn't know
    If only I had knew

    This empty nest is real
    It's killing me inside
    The boys that I once lived for
    Have all taken separate rides

    Their voices are just echoes
    It's quiet as a mouse
    Now I hear the clock tick
    In the silence of this house

    The days I thought would never end
    As I refereed a fight
    Are now the days I long for
    In the darkness of the night

    My baby boys are men now
    I couldn't be more proud
    I only wish this silence
    Didn't scream out so loud

    Life is passing quickly
    There are many things I miss
    You never value till it's gone
    That daily hug and kiss

    by Fran H.

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    jademelissa74 commented on My Empty Place

    06-19-2009

    "Life is passing quickly There are many things I miss You never value till it's gone That daily hug and kiss" Truthful words indeed! A great emotional piece. Full of reflection. Great Job!

    Frannitek

    06/19/2009

    Thank you very much JadeMelissa

    kenparme commented on My Empty Place

    02-17-2009

    This is very well put-It's hard to watch them go. Good poem.

    Frannitek

    06/19/2009

    Thanks Ken

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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