My Brother after the War
My older brotherFeels like another
Since back from the war
He's not very happy any more
Ryan is always stressed
He now has a wound on his chest
He's not the same
What a shame
So I say bye
Ryan you're a new guy
My Brother after the War
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Feels like another
Since back from the war
He's not very happy any more
Ryan is always stressed
He now has a wound on his chest
He's not the same
What a shame
So I say bye
Ryan you're a new guy
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rsalassi commented on My Brother after the War
07-02-2010
- Everyone I knew who went to VietNam came back quite changed, quite subdued, quite unwilling/unable to return to their former selves. I understand how you must feel about your brother, and, I, too, would like for him to know his service to his country is appreciated.
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gmcookie commented on My Brother after the War
07-02-2010
- Jc, how sad, but unfortunately frequently true. Tell him I said "Thank You for serving". I hope he finds peace as I had to after the Vietnam War. You might want to check out my poem "Childhood Toys" in this week's poetry contest. It's about the ones that didn't make it back alive...
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