MY BEWITCHING BROOM

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    TRUE STORY     TRY IT..

    MY BEWITCHING BROOM
    My Bewitching Broom
     
    It's kinda Kooky!
    Spooky to!
    I'd never ever lie to you.
     
    Today I took a second look.
    My broom was standing
    Not on its hook.
     
    I heard from all around the town.
    Most brooms stood tall
    And won't fall down.
     
    Something mysterious, astrological to.
    Gravitation of the moon
    Is pulling my broom!
     
    If you don't believe
    Go try it soon.
    See if you have a Bewitching Broom....
     
    (The gravitation of the moon is stronger now then it will be
    In the next 60 years possible explanation or it's Bewitched!)
     
    MAFLongfellow



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    Madelynn commented on MY BEWITCHING BROOM

    11-13-2009

    hmm-I like to think it 'tis but magik, my dear!LOL! I loved this! Very playful, yet well written with simple yet perfect measure! Is it a 10 or just a broom standing next to the ful moon-hmm,nope it's definately a ten!!-wink.
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    MAFLongfellow

    11/26/2009

    THANK YOU MADELYNN, AND HAPPY THANKSGIVING

    Lolee commented on MY BEWITCHING BROOM

    11-12-2009

    I have an electric broom that stands on it's own. I would be quite unhappy if my wooden broom stood on it's own, of a sudden. LOL! Very well done.
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    MAFLongfellow

    11/12/2009

    I'd be happier if it would sweep instead of just stand still. haha

    icu2 commented on MY BEWITCHING BROOM

    11-11-2009

    This is cute! Maybe you purchased a broom from someone who was a witch? That would explain it. lol! Nice and different! I like that!
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    MAFLongfellow

    11/12/2009

    Thanks for not calling me a witch. U R Sweet. Glad U like it, Poet Friend, Marilyn

    Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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