Morning Bliss on Beautiful Spring Days ( Lord I Love You )

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If you refuse to believe sometimes, you refuse to be happy as well.

Morning Bliss on Beautiful Spring Days ( Lord I Love You )


     Morning Bliss on Beautiful Spring Days 
           ( Lord I Love You ) 

     Walking outside this morning just as the sun rose, something struck me that I could hardly wait to share with you. 
     A brisk walk, breathing in the fresh air deeply and taking stock of the magnificent nature sorrounding me.
     Looking at the daffodils, admiring them in their bright yellow sprightliness, my mind was suddenly filled with a bright and vivid image, so splendid to behold. 
     Watching the sun glancing at them, I suddenly knew, that everything I've ever wanted and wished for, is now all within my grasp. 
      I looked up at the sky, which was a classical blue, punctuated with wispy clouds. I walked and walked listening to the joyous songs of all the birds around me. 
      It was as if, in the brilliant sunlight, the sky was a path of golden light straight to the flowers. 
      Yes, I'm the one about to leap over obstacles and barriers; 
      My life can change and my prayers, one by one, can all be answered.   
      I began putting these images together for myself, like some fantastic, cosmic jigsaw puzzles.
      Putting all this together can magically and swiftly change the path where I am in, illuminate my future and transform my life in countless fundamental ways, now and forever.

               Necy G

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gogant commented on Morning Bliss on Beautiful Spring Days ( Lord I Love You )

12-07-2010

These few words of your poem, "punctuated with wispy clouds." tells me that you are a master of the poetry of love for life. A most lovely verse, my dear...................................................gogant

Necy

12/10/2010

Yes, when at the field of thoughts, only memories were left for tomorrow ! Your comment is an inspirational piece of writing. Thank you Gogant and God Blessings. Necy

dahlusion commented on Morning Bliss on Beautiful Spring Days ( Lord I Love You )

09-15-2010

" Watching the sun glancing at them, I suddenly knew, that everything I've ever wanted and wished for, is now all within my grasp."—oh, how very beautiful! peace and light, dah

Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

Necy’s Poems (9)

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Morning Bliss on Beautiful Spring Days ( Lord I Love You ) 2
Lamentations 7
Canticle to a Lost Love ( locus classicus ) 12
Transcendenta
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10
Memory 8
Lessons of Love 8
In My Solitude 18
True Love 11
My Eternal Love 7