Missing him

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    Missing him

     I miss you, more than you could ever know
    Im in love with you,
    and you will never know,
    Well even know how much,
    My heart longs for you,
    It breaks when you leave
    the longer were apart
    My heart feels like its breaking
    and I miss you more and more
    My heart breaks the most when you get mad at me.
    When your in pain im in pain
    Im so glad God brought you into my life
    The more we are apart
    the more I grow to like you
    I dont think I could possibly like you more

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    Chrisjan commented on Missing him

    05-29-2009

    Good flow of realism in your poem. A little choppy, but this poem, coming from your heart and soul ! Thanks for sharing.
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    blue18al commented on Missing him

    05-29-2009

    I could get the feeling that you were trying to put into this one. I just was a little confused at times. Other than that good job.
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