Mirror

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  • xdavidabramx
  • tear the petals off of you, make you tell the truth // Hole

Mirror

I love you

(I'll never let you forget) me

Keeping it down

In reality, are you present?

I see you, always

Peripherally, never solid

Blurry, like love, like lust, like pain

 

I need you

(I'll never let you forgive) me

You're like an empty feeling

Caressing the pit of my stomach

My soul, do we have a regret?

Not yet

Amazing, like you, like hurt, but not like me

 

I want you

(I'll never let you forget) yourself

Remember everyday

Words that flow

Out of me, I'm never complete

I'm like half of a soul

Where's your better half?

I'll never let you forget

 

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Platti commented on Mirror

04-28-2010

Hmm, I rather like this one. 'I see you, always Peripherally, never solid Blurry, like love, like lust, like pain' brilliant my friend! :3 Keep at it!

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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