Metaphoric Life

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    Metaphoric Life
    This world was made to be a visionary complexity,
    But little do we know its our legendary necessity.
    God created this image to be focused upon completely, And if our snapshot is perfect, we'd survive freely but discretely.

    All the time, I sit and wonder about the projections for tomorrow, Will I live peacefully, in worries, or remain with great sorrows.
    Life, is a symbolic feature yet to be discovered by man, Yet all the advances await us in the near future, but the supply is less in demand.
    Great minds, great figures, and all of mankind pay debt to this price And continue struggle on how to live on through this Metaphoric Life.

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    MsHangtime commented on Metaphoric Life

    09-30-2009

    this is a really good poem. its a little hard to understand tho but i think i get it for the most part so u get a good 10 from me.
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    CasimirJash commented on Metaphoric Life

    09-17-2009

    makes me wonder about something...most of your poems are like that. great insight. life is but a metaphor or riddle we have yet to figure out.
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    causeofbalance commented on Metaphoric Life

    12-08-2008

    Man another good poem, I like how you account for future events in terms of embracing them, or embracing what we do not know. Relevant comment? I'm new to the poem thing.
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    tidekeeper commented on Metaphoric Life

    11-26-2008

    very nice. the completies of your thoughts are well understood in these verses. thanks for sharing.
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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