May I Have This Dance?

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  • Passion

    May I Have This Dance?

    Go and venture off
    Get lost in this world
    Go and find life's meaning
    Painted within a mural
    Take the soonest flight
    Away to France
    But before you leave,
    May I have this dance?

    Forgive and forget
    Just don't forget me
    Let go of your burdens
    Before chasing your dreams
    If i could be so lucky
    As to have one glance
    The tune has begun
    May I have this dance?

    January is here
    Time isn't our friend
    The ache that I feel
    I swear it, won't end
    I'm stunned by your wonder
    Let it happen by chance
    Before I'm forgotten
    May I have this dance?

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    arronpalmer commented on May I Have This Dance?

    10-18-2010

    Love this. The short but sweeping lines really convey a sense of dance. You should be proud of this piece, it's great.
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    HannahLynn

    10/19/2010

    Thank you, darling. :)

    cheronld commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-23-2010

    I wish all lost loves could end in such a beautiful way....I can so relate....its always just one more nite before you go...with the ones who touched you so...nicely done...Cher
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    HannahLynn commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-22-2010

    Thank you guys. :D
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    lonewolf commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-21-2010

    this could very easily be the words to a song for a romantic comedy. i really enjoyed this piece.
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    ImStillHere commented on May I Have This Dance?

    09-21-2010

    i like how this poem gives you the sense that one is running away... 10 ~Audrey
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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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