LOVE

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  • Love And Loss

    LOVE

     LOVE IS A PHRASE
    THAT TURNS INTO A MAZE
    IT LEAVES YOU IN A DAZE
    AND MAKE YOU CHANGE YOUR WAYS

    LOVE HAS A BEAUTIFUL BEGINNING
    BUT A SAD ENDING

    LOVE CAN MAKE YOU LOSE WEIGHT
    AND BUILD UP A WHOLE LOT OF HATE

    LOVE CAN LEAVE YOU TRAPPED
    CAUSING YOU TO SNAP

    LOVE IS LIKE A SWITCH
    IT LEAVES YOU IN A DITCH

    LOVE EVENTUALLY RUNS OUT
    LEAVING YOU IN DOUBT!!!!!!!

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    maryam21 commented on LOVE

    10-04-2010

    you are right and I like this poem Love is a lot of things.. Good write.
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    ansari commented on LOVE

    08-20-2010

    Love is a very complex human and animal emotion. You have a point of view. thank you.
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    icu2 commented on LOVE

    02-04-2010

    You know a lot about love and you said it well. But, sometimes love lasts to the very end of a lifetime. The bible says that love endures forever. This means, it tolerates and bears hardship. But it sure is a rare and special thing to find in a mate...huh.
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    SBOYD

    02/05/2010

    YES IT IS,,,,THERE ARE SOME LOVE THAT CAN LAST FOREVER BUT ITS RARE!!!

    bluewolf commented on LOVE

    02-02-2010

    Love is a parallel of confusion and misconceptions. Often I have wondered the validity of love, in as far as the depth and conviction that many claim to place upon its level of importance and their actions thereof as to the amount of energy and time they are willing to place upon maintaining such. Perhaps this is the best way I can define ‘true’ love, as far as my own viewpoint: BLAISE PASCAL: You always admire what you really don't understand.
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    SBOYD

    02/05/2010

    SO TRUE...THANK U!!!!

    Stryx commented on LOVE

    02-01-2010

    Short on phrasing, but long on feeling and meaning.
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    SBOYD

    02/05/2010

    THANKS

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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