Love training

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    Love training

    Sensuality 
         
    abounds within
          
      at the first whisper

    of your sensouos voice

       your lips do control me
      
      in this  lesson of passion
       
      I am your eager pupil
      in training for love

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    BrokenHeart2009 commented on Love training

    01-07-2011

    Now Topaz this could be a song, it has a beat, like the part in training for love can be the repeating lyric, I like it. It sounds like it could be a hit:)
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