Love Garden

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    This poem was inspired by a recent phone call I got, there was a female automated voice on the other end, and I really think we connected...

    Love Garden

          Tenderness,
    The sound of your voice,
         I'm helpless,
    It makes my soul rejoice

    It's rich with promiss,
    That our union will be beautiful,
    And our love garden plentiful,
    Cultivating hope in my heart

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    gogant commented on Love Garden

    11-26-2009

    A sweet voice on the other end could spell a disastrous encounter...but, what the heck, we can always dream in color................................................gogant
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    MichaelTierney

    11/26/2009

    I've always heard that some psychologist claim we don't dream in color. My argument to that is they may not be able to because they are lame, but I dream in a vibrant full spectrum, cause I'm freaking awesome... to put it modestly.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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