Lost time, lost life.

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    Lost time, lost life.

    Why delay the answer you know you must give,

    And now with wasted time; my wasted life,

    I must sever this one last bond.

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    SoundingStorm commented on Lost time, lost life.

    01-27-2010

    Life is made up of many things, foremost, to my eyes at least, it is made up of love and time. This poem was about a girl who cost me more than a little of both love and time, and therefore part of my life.
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    cmlestrade commented on Lost time, lost life.

    01-27-2010

    I don't see how the title relates to a lost life. The poem has a very good and definite rhythm but the idea of a lost life is not forthcoming
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    Tempy commented on Lost time, lost life.

    12-06-2009

    we are made of atoms that have bonded and spun us into this wretched existence. bonds are like water hard to ever split them but stop it flowing and it drips drops down the drain. when you asume an answer and if y ou know what it is..... its the most difficult to have to say it out loud just cos you wish them to hear it out loud. ots not a good feeling to be expected to say what you know allready its almost shamefully insulting. answers are not easy
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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