Looks can be deceiving

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    This poem is about how diffferent women and men are. We can walk into a situation know what it 's gonna be and still not know how to seperate sex from love. It's one in the same to most women.  I love you there for I'll share my body with you. Men on the other hand love sex and will give you there body because they love the act.

    Looks can be deceiving
    At first I wasn't sure
    But now I definitely know
    Why did I fall in love with you
    It was suppose to be just physical

    Now I'm stuck with all these emotions
    And I just don't understand
    How I could fall in love with you
    Knowing you're not a one woman man

    It hurts to be around you
    Knowing you don't share the way I feel
    What's hurts the most
    Is pretending it's no big deal

    I'm on the verge of tears
    It's tearing me up indide
    I don't know why
    But I want you so badly
    In my life

    I do have my pride
    So I'll put my feelings aside
    I'll hold my head up high
    Even if it's a lie

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    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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