Looking into his eyes

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    Looking into his eyes
    When I look into his eyes,
    I'm taken aback in such surprise.
    To see such depth within them lies,
    I wonder if he'll hear my cries.
    Even though we have no ties,
    he should know I will tell no lies.
    But when I look into his eyes,
    I see sadness that within them cries.
    He holds this feeling so it never dies.
    But he hides this feeling cause he is wise.
    That's what I see when I look into his eyes.

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    giri commented on Looking into his eyes

    07-14-2009

    a wise poeme from a wise lady the eye is the visionary part of this lovely world. thank you for showing the sight friend.
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    lenitabonita commented on Looking into his eyes

    04-29-2009

    Very good wow a lotta feeling. your talented! Can't wait to read more!
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    MiserysMistress

    05/28/2009

    Thanks, I wrote this poem for a friend. Sometimes the look in his eyes just hit you in the soul and make you want to cry.

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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