life sucks
life sucks
it always has 2
life sucks
i guess thats the truth
life sucks
it always has 2
it always has 2
life sucks
i guess thats the truth
life sucks
it always has 2
life sucks
6 Comments
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- TwilightLover
- wishin i had friends on 2 chat with
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TheAngelOfDeath commented on life sucks
09-26-2009
- yes i does lol :)............................................
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Angel197038 commented on life sucks
07-05-2009
- You obviously seem to be having a hard time and I hope and pray that this gets better for you. I admire your honesty in your work.....I would only suggest that you put more emphasis on why this is that you feel this way so that people understand where you are coming from. Thanks for sharing your work! God Bless, Helen
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HopeOhlarik commented on life sucks
05-19-2009
- i have read a couple of your poems and it seems like your the type that loves to repeat things. that isn't bad when writting poems but you have to spread it out a little more. poems have to have a body or they are just words put in places. try and give it a body. and life does suck while we're young, but it will get better, it always does!
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mnowlin11 commented on life sucks
05-16-2009
- life gets better as u become an adult
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DeepBlueSeas commented on life sucks
05-08-2009
- some poems are meant to be short especialy when they convey their meaning so clearly. i would suggest not using a number unless it is a numeric value you are trying to convey
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